comments on the schematic: hierarchically (due to location and color) the entry point is in "channel" but should be "source".
scale changes are nice. but tighten up typography. explore more color. refine arrows. use of "transparency" for noise is a good idea, but needs resolution.
continue working on this schematic. but how does it get incorporated into the postcard interactive book?
the schematic and postcards are speaking two separate visual languages. bridge these worlds. can there be any visual reference to graphic elements from your cards (texture, color) in the schematic?
and vice versa - for example the "noise" visual treatment can appear in the booklet.
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comments on the schematic:
hierarchically (due to location and color) the entry point is in "channel" but should be "source".
scale changes are nice. but tighten up typography. explore more color. refine arrows. use of "transparency" for noise is a good idea, but needs resolution.
continue working on this schematic. but how does it get incorporated into the postcard interactive book?
the schematic and postcards are speaking two separate visual languages. bridge these worlds. can there be any visual reference to graphic elements from your cards (texture, color) in the schematic?
and vice versa - for example the "noise" visual treatment can appear in the booklet.
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