I think my favorite that you have up here is the serious one because you get the sense of it and the type you chose has a in your face feel. Your photos are so powerful, I can't wait to see the rest of your pairings.
Good series Kate, I think you should revise some for greater effect though.
The caps in lustful are really unnecessary information and a closer cropping on the brushes would help. Maybe scale up relaxing so that the horizontal line from the r to the cap are closer to the left and right edges. Should Powerful just be Power (wait for the group exercise to revise)? Cold works well because of the color, but the word placement could be less aggressive/in your face. Should confident be a bolder face?
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I think my favorite that you have up here is the serious one because you get the sense of it and the type you chose has a in your face feel. Your photos are so powerful, I can't wait to see the rest of your pairings.
Good series Kate, I think you should revise some for greater effect though.
The caps in lustful are really unnecessary information and a closer cropping on the brushes would help. Maybe scale up relaxing so that the horizontal line from the r to the cap are closer to the left and right edges. Should Powerful just be Power (wait for the group exercise to revise)? Cold works well because of the color, but the word placement could be less aggressive/in your face. Should confident be a bolder face?
Michael
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